Thread:PyroGothNerd/@comment-4060385-20140107163304/@comment-9340689-20140117232152

((Now you just made me laugh.....seriously, though. What Shadow did and how he reacted was overdone and made no sense! Tone it down...and remember...Iris being your sister was YOUR IDEA...so Shadow needs to ACT like he's her sister! Since Iris is starting to cry because she's upset with Seaderus and his friends, I'd start there... though you might want to remove the previous what Shadow did so that it makes sense))